James K Baxter Poetry Analysis – Fusion of Language and Theme

This is an analysis of “Poem in the Matukituki Valley” by New Zealand poet James K Baxter. I will be discussing the extent to which I agree that the fusion of language and theme in poetry is very strong. If you are studying NCEA Level three English at a New Zealand secondary school then this analysis may be of extreme value for you.

It has been said that James K. Baxter has “the ability to materialize what we all ignore”. Upon looking at one of his poems: ”Poem in the Matukituki Valley”, us readers realize that his ability to do this is due to his powerful fusion of language and theme. By combining religious symbolism and emotive diction in this poem with the theme of wasting time and wasting away Baxter does indeed present us with a message we ought not to ignore.

Religious symbolism is used in “Poem in the Matukituki Valley” to show how God and spirituality is reflected in nature. In turn this leads us to realize how our fear of both God and nature causes us to waste time in a life that seems so much easier. “For us the land is matrix and destroyer, resentful, darkly known.” We feel threatened by God, seeing him as both creator and destroyer but we fail to truly realize the miracles he creates in nature. We fail to see “sky’s purity; the altar cloth of snow” and the “daybreak that brings raincloud on purple ranges”. Instead we as humans choose to ignore such beauty and are unable to “endure the hermit’s peace and mindless esctasy.” I feel that by using such symbols of religion, Baxter shows us how beauty exists in spirituality and nature and that we should not fear either of these. Time is wasted conforming to a life that seems easier to cope with, a life dedicated to our careers, families and friends. We choose to turn to a life where “no wild tresspass of what’s eternal” exists. We dig ourselves into a “grave of time” not realizing that in the end, things like careers and money do not matter. So often, we as human beings feel that changing our lives and turning towards religion or spirituality sounds like too much work and it seems easier just to stay in the same monotonous life of socialising, work and having relationships with the same old people. It is these ideas that help prove that the fusion of language and theme is indeed very strong.

The emotive diction used in “Poem in the Matukituki Valley” helps to further emphasise the choice of humans to waste time and turn away from spirituality. The langauge found in this poem is very soft and reflective. “The forest blanket sheds its cloudy pollen and cloaks a range in undevouring fire.” From such examples, it can be revealed that God is a figure of might and power but just like the “undevouring fire”, he does no real harm. We do not see this however. We ignore the red deer that “lift  their innocent heads” or the “feathered moss and filigree of bracken”, instead turning to the “gentle dark of the human daydream”. Such soft emotive diction shows a philosophical side of a poet who has become more accepting of human faults but still wants us readeres to grasp an understanding of the fact that nature and in turn spirituality are indeed beautiful things. By fusing emotive diction with the idea of wasting time and wasting away, Baxter challenges us to think about why we choose to ignore this God-gifted world of miracles and wonder. For too long we have been ignorant of the simple things in life and for too long have we lived a life of conformity. If Baxter had not been so understanding of this then maybe he would not have been able to communicate his message of living a wasted, unfufilled life so clearly.

James K Baxter challenges us to disregard human limitations and become people who are true to ourselves. It is up to us whether or not we choose to do this. We are all products of our experiences but Baxter shows us trhough the fusion of language and theme that we can become new products of spirituality and understanding. Time is precious and it is what we as humans choose to do with it that will determine the paths we go along in life – one of conformity or one that has been less travelled.

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  1. Sarah Wilson
    Posted February 7, 2009 at 11:15 pm

    These ideas are interesting and may even have some merit.

    However, it is useful to understand the historical context of the poem. In 1949, painter John Drawbridge, photographer Brian Brake, composer Douglas Lilburn and poet James K. Baxter went into the Matukituki Valley near Wānaka to make a film about an ascent of Mt Aspiring (Tititea). It was intended to be a poetic tribute to the place of mountains in New Zealand culture. In the end, the weather was poor, the footage disappeared and the film was never made. But the incident did lead the 23-year-old Baxter to write ‘Poem in the Matukituki Valley’, which evoked the mountain environment.

    Having just returned myself from an attempt on Mt Aspiring I believe that what Baxter was getting at was far deeper than the thoughts above which are very intellectual. In truth the rawness of the environment, the sheer level of overwhelm as well as the ecstacy of being in that environment are what Baxter captures in a way that any mountaineer will instantly relate to.

    He is not so concerned with “time passing” per se. Rather, it is the brightness of the natural world (and the mountains in particular) that causes us to retreat to the manageability of life in the city.

    Go to the Matukituki. Walk up to French Ridge Hut. Experience the beauty and feel completely puny against those huge mountains and you will experience God – whatever that means to you. And you will get a deep sense of Baxter’s grasp of language beyond ivory tower understanding.

  2. Posted February 26, 2009 at 8:55 pm

    Hi there Sarah. Wow thanks for that! I am even more inspired now to visit places such as the Matukituki. Unfortunately, my Year 13 English class (myself most certainly included) took the words of our English teacher as those of some higher being and actually thinking that the poem was indeed about “time passing”.

    Mountains can indeed be such overwhelming landscapes; I feel emotions of awe and amazement whenever I travel along the Desert Road past Mt Ruapehu, Ngauruhoe and Tongariro.

    I also didn’t realize that Baxter was only 23 when he wrote this poem! He most certainly had a great maturity beyond his years that’s for sure.

    Thanks once again, for your comment. I really appreciated it a lot.

  3. Melanie
    Posted March 28, 2009 at 5:57 am

    Hi, I am wondering if anyone can help me with any historical/biblical references in Lament for Barney Flanagan?
    Thanks

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